Over the years I have come across many things that can turn a
good novel bad. I am not a full -time professional writer or editor although I
dabble in both. But I do consider myself a professional reader. With that said,
her are, The Waring Rule’s for staying away
for the dreaded- One Star Rating.
1.
Do not name every character in the novel, the
bartender does not need a name if he is only the bartender. Neither does the
guy sitting across from the protagonist at a poker game- if he is never again
in the story.
2.
Some words are spelled differently in England than
in the United States. A Defense Attorney
in America is different from a Defence Attorney in England.
3.
I hate a page with three sentences on a page and a
next page with fifteen. A few long sentences are fine, but too many and it gets
difficult to read.
4.
Comments
from a few westerns I have recently read. Please be aware I am a professional
historian-these may not bug everyone.
·
Fry Bread became popular in the 1860s with the
Navajo who were given so little provisions it was one of the few foods they
could make. It was never common in cafés or in non-Indian homes. And it was Fry
Bread, not, Fried Bread. It tastes great, if you want to try it I posted a recipe
on my cooking site some time ago. http://crazy-cooking.blogspot.com/2013/01/journey-bread-and-donuts.html
·
Early playing cards were not marked in the corners
like todays.
·
Cowboys would never have ordered a steak rare
·
There were no blue jeans in the old west
·
The cowboy did not pull his fixin’s from his shirt
pocket
As far as one star ratings, I don’t give
them. If I can’t give it a three or better I don’t rate it. I also don’t give
ratings to books that already have several dozen ratings. If you are anything
like me, I only look at a few of the ratings, that’s enough.
2 comments:
I agree with your comments. Some writers don't research or double check enough.
Just finished a book where they had hash browns for breakfast. Looked it up - weren't around for at least another 10 years. He also messed up the guns bad - never should happen in a western.
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